you portray Ben's character flaws, imbedded into the story. I like the way you use the setting of this kind pastoral family to reflect his flaws back to him in a tolerant and redemptive way. I wanted to read more, to find if his insights changed any of his nasty behaviors. But as you typically do, you leave that to the reader to ponder.
you portray Ben's character flaws, imbedded into the story. I like the way you use the setting of this kind pastoral family to reflect his flaws back to him in a tolerant and redemptive way. I wanted to read more, to find if his insights changed any of his nasty behaviors. But as you typically do, you leave that to the reader to ponder.